Read 1.1, then 1.2... And what do you think?

[dolst]

Hey everyone,

I know this is a rather small forum, dedicated to a rather esoteric subject, but I see that my work has had a few views, and nobody has said anything about it. Has anyone enjoyed the first part? Does anyone care what happens to Doklen? Does my writing suck? Any feedback would be appreciated. Surf Wisely.

[Canaacap]

I read it, and am wondering when you'll be writing more!

I always wondered if any fans wrote their own version of how the Sterlings got home (and when - 200 years after JFK or close to their own time?).

My favourite scenario is that they're standing near the portal to go home, and Hal summons Nuveen Kroll so he can give him back his precious access crystal, then step into the portal to return to Earth.  Whether Kroll follows them through and finds himself as a 'castaway' himself is optional!  Maybe he could become an actor playing a lookalike of Jonathan Banks...

[dolst]

Oh awesome! I'm glad I checked back! I thought nobody was interested. Well, I never did get around to finishing Part 2, since I didn't perceive any interest. But I'll be sure to finish it..... as soon as I figure out how it ends! lol
But yeah, I'll post it here when I do. Thanks! Surf Wisely.

[Chip]

I read it, and am wondering when you'll be writing more!

I always wondered if any fans wrote their own version of how the Sterlings got home (and when - 200 years after JFK or close to their own time?).

My favourite scenario is that they're standing near the portal to go home, and Hal summons Nuveen Kroll so he can give him back his precious access crystal, then step into the portal to return to Earth.  Whether Kroll follows them through and finds himself as a 'castaway' himself is optional!  Maybe he could become an actor playing a lookalike of Jonathan Banks...

I love that idea! Kroll having to live with the Sterlings while he looks for a job etc ha ha ha that would be like the ultimate revenge!

[Chip]

Read one and two. Very cool, so many memories there the biorupters, the sign post astrologers I was just a kid when this was on  I even recorded the theme on my old panasonic tape player. It was made more for playing than recording but it could record. I tried to find a pic of it but had no luck. I remember those machines were really cool looking they were rounded with the handle gracefully completing the ovoid shape on top I think I still have the tape somewhere. Your quite a scholar of Otherworld to have written that.